Friday, July 17

The Suicide Note



I am ending my life in total consciousness because I dont anymore want to be the reason behind the tears of people I love.
Please forgive me mom...


P.S. My first attempt at 55 Fiction. Tomatoes, eggs, even stones are welcome.



35 Obiter Dicta (Comment here):

bondgal_rulz said...

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT!!!!

We want more, we want more!!!

Honestly, amazing first attempt. :)

Cheers

Rià said...

omg!!this was so scary...never the less good attempt. :)

Pranav Kumar V said...

*tomatoes* + *eggs* = good breakfast!! :P

Go go go!!! Seriously, GO on girl... :)

See you when I see you... :D

neha said...

shit! that was scary..
anyway good work with fiction...

Ratzzz said...

Hey great one!!!!

but seriously , suicide??? tomatohoes and eggsss.. :-\

Onward said...

Yaar i didnt understand it at all...thoda dense hoon par doosth hoo na toh do explain it to me ok :D...

luv
amith

P said...

are applauses welcome?

*hoots*
:D

Richa said...

@ Isha,
thnx babes :)
i was rather wondering u wud bombard me with y suicide :P

Cheers!!

Richa said...

@ Ria,
I made it scary babes :)

thnx :)

Richa said...

@ Pranav,
okay, I am veggie though :D

r u sure??

thnx :)

Richa said...

@ Neha,
as i said, I made it scary on purpose :D

thnx :)

Richa said...

@ D Rat,
arrey, ye Dharam paaji wali suicide hai :D

Richa said...

@ Amith,
hehe, i will sure explain it u :D

Love!!

Richa said...

@ Punya,
awwww... thnx really :D

Arv said...

ok now... that was a freaky one... thankfully, it was a 55F :)

take care da... cheers...

Amal Bose said...

nice one.. loved it :)

parzi said...

thats a painful one...but then thats how its suppose to be...well written....n realistic...
y eggs n tomatoes...from my side...applause....
keep writing
god bless!

Anil Sawan said...

nice one!! :)

Tara said...

Arey baba! Hum toh darr gaye the! Lekin vadda changa hai ji! :D Keep it going! :)

Tara said...

Waise, can you give me Punjabi lessons? ;)

Pesto Sauce said...

Suicides are an act of the weak

Americanising Desi said...

that is truly a brilliant attempt :)

Anonymous said...

Thoda scary tha but SAHI :D

Anwesa said...

ek dum dhansoo tha...i dunno wat xactly is "dhansoo" lol but it was better dan my 1st attempt @ 55f kudos!!!

Keshi said...

A very real situation.

And a good attempt there Richa!

Keshi.

bondgal_rulz said...

He he...nahi re...I have a love affair with tragedy when it comes to writing. :) So I totally LOVED it. :)

Arjun said...

tomatoes..... ..

eggs............

did i aim right?? :P

nice start to 55 fiction though... ;)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Karthik said...

Hey, you have really taken us by surprise here. More than making you beneficiary of eggs or tomatoes,am myself perplexed and baffled musing over what you might be upto !
But Nevertheless, have an unwavering confidence in you that,what ever u do,u make sure to keep us engrossed!!
Continue the good work darling :-)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

what was that?

main to darr gaya tha....

tumhare fiction ka first attempt hi bada khatarnak hai madam :-P

Cheers
Mahesh

Anonymous said...

Initially, i also got scared but then i read the comments and realized that you are writing a story.

Richa said...

@ Arv,
trust me, It was a fiction :D

cheers!!

Richa said...

@ Amal,
thnx :)

Richa said...

@ Parzi
first of all,
welcome :)

and thank you so much for liking it :)

Enchanted Sophie said...

Superb buddy!

ani_aset said...

superb attempt..there were more words you could have used :)..

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