Friday, July 17

The Suicide Note



I am ending my life in total consciousness because I dont anymore want to be the reason behind the tears of people I love.
Please forgive me mom...


P.S. My first attempt at 55 Fiction. Tomatoes, eggs, even stones are welcome.



35 Obiter Dicta (Comment here):

bondgal_rulz said...

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT!!!!

We want more, we want more!!!

Honestly, amazing first attempt. :)

Cheers

Ria said...

omg!!this was so scary...never the less good attempt. :)

Pranav Kumar V said...

*tomatoes* + *eggs* = good breakfast!! :P

Go go go!!! Seriously, GO on girl... :)

See you when I see you... :D

NEHA HADKAR said...

shit! that was scary..
anyway good work with fiction...

The Rat... said...

Hey great one!!!!

but seriously , suicide??? tomatohoes and eggsss.. :-\

Aw.S.M said...

Yaar i didnt understand it at all...thoda dense hoon par doosth hoo na toh do explain it to me ok :D...

luv
amith

Jinxed Pixie said...

are applauses welcome?

*hoots*
:D

яノςんム said...

@ Isha,
thnx babes :)
i was rather wondering u wud bombard me with y suicide :P

Cheers!!

яノςんム said...

@ Ria,
I made it scary babes :)

thnx :)

яノςんム said...

@ Pranav,
okay, I am veggie though :D

r u sure??

thnx :)

яノςんム said...

@ Neha,
as i said, I made it scary on purpose :D

thnx :)

яノςんム said...

@ D Rat,
arrey, ye Dharam paaji wali suicide hai :D

яノςんム said...

@ Amith,
hehe, i will sure explain it u :D

Love!!

яノςんム said...

@ Punya,
awwww... thnx really :D

Arv said...

ok now... that was a freaky one... thankfully, it was a 55F :)

take care da... cheers...

Amal Bose said...

nice one.. loved it :)

parzi said...

thats a painful one...but then thats how its suppose to be...well written....n realistic...
y eggs n tomatoes...from my side...applause....
keep writing
god bless!

sawan said...

nice one!! :)

Tara said...

Arey baba! Hum toh darr gaye the! Lekin vadda changa hai ji! :D Keep it going! :)

Tara said...

Waise, can you give me Punjabi lessons? ;)

Pesto Sauce said...

Suicides are an act of the weak

AD said...

that is truly a brilliant attempt :)

Ki said...

Thoda scary tha but SAHI :D

ANWESA said...

ek dum dhansoo tha...i dunno wat xactly is "dhansoo" lol but it was better dan my 1st attempt @ 55f kudos!!!

Keshi said...

A very real situation.

And a good attempt there Richa!

Keshi.

bondgal_rulz said...

He he...nahi re...I have a love affair with tragedy when it comes to writing. :) So I totally LOVED it. :)

Arjun said...

tomatoes..... ..

eggs............

did i aim right?? :P

nice start to 55 fiction though... ;)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Karthik said...

Hey, you have really taken us by surprise here. More than making you beneficiary of eggs or tomatoes,am myself perplexed and baffled musing over what you might be upto !
But Nevertheless, have an unwavering confidence in you that,what ever u do,u make sure to keep us engrossed!!
Continue the good work darling :-)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

what was that?

main to darr gaya tha....

tumhare fiction ka first attempt hi bada khatarnak hai madam :-P

Cheers
Mahesh

Gigi said...

Initially, i also got scared but then i read the comments and realized that you are writing a story.

яノςんム said...

@ Arv,
trust me, It was a fiction :D

cheers!!

яノςんム said...

@ Amal,
thnx :)

яノςんム said...

@ Parzi
first of all,
welcome :)

and thank you so much for liking it :)

VJ Sophie said...

Superb buddy!

ani_aset said...

superb attempt..there were more words you could have used :)..

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