Redefining Abstractions: The Suicide Note

Friday, July 17

The Suicide Note

at 8:45 pm

I am ending my life in total consciousness because I dont anymore want to be the reason behind the tears of people I love.
Please forgive me mom...

P.S. My first attempt at 55 Fiction. Tomatoes, eggs, even stones are welcome.

35 Obiter Dicta (Comment here):

bondgal_rulz said...: LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT!!!!

We want more, we want more!!!

Honestly, amazing first attempt. :)

Cheers; 17 July 2009 at 9:34 pm
Rià said...: omg!!this was so scary...never the less good attempt. :); 17 July 2009 at 10:23 pm
Pranav Kumar V said...: *tomatoes* + *eggs* = good breakfast!! :P

Go go go!!! Seriously, GO on girl... :)

See you when I see you... :D; 17 July 2009 at 10:40 pm
neha said...: shit! that was scary..
anyway good work with fiction...; 17 July 2009 at 10:55 pm
Ratzzz said...: Hey great one!!!!

but seriously , suicide??? tomatohoes and eggsss.. :-\; 17 July 2009 at 11:17 pm
Onward said...: Yaar i didnt understand it at all...thoda dense hoon par doosth hoo na toh do explain it to me ok :D...

luv
amith; 18 July 2009 at 2:44 am
P said...: are applauses welcome?

*hoots*
:D; 18 July 2009 at 7:44 am
Richa said...: @ Isha,
thnx babes :)
i was rather wondering u wud bombard me with y suicide :P

Cheers!!; 18 July 2009 at 2:21 pm
Richa said...: @ Ria,
I made it scary babes :)

thnx :); 18 July 2009 at 2:21 pm
Richa said...: @ Pranav,
okay, I am veggie though :D

r u sure??

thnx :); 18 July 2009 at 2:22 pm
Richa said...: @ Neha,
as i said, I made it scary on purpose :D

thnx :); 18 July 2009 at 2:24 pm
Richa said...: @ D Rat,
arrey, ye Dharam paaji wali suicide hai :D; 18 July 2009 at 2:24 pm
Richa said...: @ Amith,
hehe, i will sure explain it u :D

Love!!; 18 July 2009 at 2:25 pm
Richa said...: @ Punya,
awwww... thnx really :D; 18 July 2009 at 2:25 pm
Arv said...: ok now... that was a freaky one... thankfully, it was a 55F :)

take care da... cheers...; 18 July 2009 at 6:50 pm
Amal Bose said...: nice one.. loved it :); 18 July 2009 at 9:03 pm
parzi said...: thats a painful one...but then thats how its suppose to be...well written....n realistic...
y eggs n tomatoes...from my side...applause....
keep writing
god bless!; 18 July 2009 at 9:23 pm
Anil Sawan said...: nice one!! :); 19 July 2009 at 11:26 am
Tara said...: Arey baba! Hum toh darr gaye the! Lekin vadda changa hai ji! :D Keep it going! :); 19 July 2009 at 12:49 pm
Tara said...: Waise, can you give me Punjabi lessons? ;); 19 July 2009 at 12:49 pm
Pesto Sauce said...: Suicides are an act of the weak; 19 July 2009 at 3:15 pm
Americanising Desi said...: that is truly a brilliant attempt :); 19 July 2009 at 7:34 pm
Anonymous said...: Thoda scary tha but SAHI :D; 19 July 2009 at 7:55 pm
Anwesa said...: ek dum dhansoo tha...i dunno wat xactly is "dhansoo" lol but it was better dan my 1st attempt @ 55f kudos!!!; 19 July 2009 at 8:07 pm
Keshi said...: A very real situation.

And a good attempt there Richa!

Keshi.; 20 July 2009 at 6:46 am
bondgal_rulz said...: He he...nahi re...I have a love affair with tragedy when it comes to writing. :) So I totally LOVED it. :); 21 July 2009 at 12:18 am
Arjun said...: tomatoes..... ..

eggs............

did i aim right?? :P

nice start to 55 fiction though... ;)

Cheers..!!
Arjun; 21 July 2009 at 2:48 pm
Karthik said...: Hey, you have really taken us by surprise here. More than making you beneficiary of eggs or tomatoes,am myself perplexed and baffled musing over what you might be upto !
But Nevertheless, have an unwavering confidence in you that,what ever u do,u make sure to keep us engrossed!!
Continue the good work darling :-); 22 July 2009 at 4:14 pm
Mahesh Sindbandge said...: what was that?

main to darr gaya tha....

tumhare fiction ka first attempt hi bada khatarnak hai madam :-P

Cheers
Mahesh; 24 July 2009 at 12:47 am
Anonymous said...: Initially, i also got scared but then i read the comments and realized that you are writing a story.; 24 July 2009 at 7:24 pm
Richa said...: @ Arv,
trust me, It was a fiction :D

cheers!!; 26 July 2009 at 11:01 pm
Richa said...: @ Amal,
thnx :); 26 July 2009 at 11:01 pm
Richa said...: @ Parzi
first of all,
welcome :)

and thank you so much for liking it :); 26 July 2009 at 11:02 pm
Enchanted Sophie said...: Superb buddy!; 27 July 2009 at 1:26 am
ani_aset said...: superb attempt..there were more words you could have used :)..; 29 July 2009 at 3:15 pm